Contents: I can see continuity between your compositions in colour scheme, but again I would like to see another colour added to your palette to make the general feel of the magazine more aesthetically pleasing. - Your font size is too big for the contents page and does not guide the reader easily through the pages. - You make reference to the front cover but as it is not boxed out or displayed using a different colour it doesn't pop out on the page. - The free posters section takes up too much space and could be incorporated elsewhere, possibly on the bottom of the page. - Your page numbering is confusing and is not consistent, please choose one way of showing page numbers. - Gerneally the page feels too busy and is difficult to navigate.
Contents: I can see continuity between your compositions in colour scheme, but again I would like to see another colour added to your palette to make the general feel of the magazine more aesthetically pleasing.
ReplyDelete- Your font size is too big for the contents page and does not guide the reader easily through the pages.
- You make reference to the front cover but as it is not boxed out or displayed using a different colour it doesn't pop out on the page.
- The free posters section takes up too much space and could be incorporated elsewhere, possibly on the bottom of the page.
- Your page numbering is confusing and is not consistent, please choose one way of showing page numbers.
- Gerneally the page feels too busy and is difficult to navigate.