Double Page Spread - You have shown an improvement from your first draft, howerver this still needs work. - In terms of the title it seems a bit basic - could anything be added to this? - There does not seem to be much use of colour - please try and incorporate this. It can still be minimalistic e.g. underlining titles in a different colour, or quotes, but it will make the page more aesthetically appealing. - Your shot is too blury and not of a high enough quality, you also need to neaten the way it has been cut out. Please consider trying this shot in colour. - The placing of your quotes makes the page feel a bit overwhelmed, can you address this? - Consider where the page will fold and make amendments as appropriate.
Double Page Spread - You have shown an improvement from your first draft, howerver this still needs work.
ReplyDelete- In terms of the title it seems a bit basic - could anything be added to this?
- There does not seem to be much use of colour - please try and incorporate this. It can still be minimalistic e.g. underlining titles in a different colour, or quotes, but it will make the page more aesthetically appealing.
- Your shot is too blury and not of a high enough quality, you also need to neaten the way it has been cut out. Please consider trying this shot in colour.
- The placing of your quotes makes the page feel a bit overwhelmed, can you address this?
- Consider where the page will fold and make amendments as appropriate.